What I really like in this deviation is the technique you have used. The photo is very nicely exposed, greatly metered and has almost none unfocused spots. Except for the clouds which is a good thing of course since you are shooting long exposure.
Also the feeling is great, I believe this image holds different perspectives and moods. This is helped mainly by the convertion to BW.
What I would suggest is maybe cropping out the left part of the image. I think it is quite distracting and if it was removed the main subject of the image would be shown in a better way.
All in all I think it is a great piece and a great effort and with some changes in composition it can get even better
Also the feeling is great, I believe this image holds different perspectives and moods. This is helped mainly by the convertion to BW.
What I would suggest is maybe cropping out the left part of the image. I think it is quite distracting and if it was removed the main subject of the image would be shown in a better way.
All in all I think it is a great piece and a great effort and with some changes in composition it can get even better